Comments on: Float On http://romansturgis.com/2010/03/10/float-on/ Fiction podcasts and my blog. Sun, 06 Feb 2011 00:44:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: miser http://romansturgis.com/2010/03/10/float-on/comment-page-1/#comment-278 miser Sun, 06 Feb 2011 00:44:05 +0000 http://romansturgis.com/?p=628#comment-278 i want my pelican, just after my hoverboard. a few nits to pick on tech vocab.. http://www.drjack.info/INFO/DELMONTE/img2.page.html soaring gains altitude, gliding loses altitude....reminds me of a prior scifi where the kids were flying in the air supply of a moon base, or arc ship.. don't remember, may have been a girl protag. but 1/6th g or less make muscle power borderline plausible, is your pelican powered for propulsion/lift, or just the auxiliary legs, controls, etc.? just wondering respiration is accurate, but sounds a bit prissy, would panting or heavy breathing be more in tune? i was going to mention busty before, thought better of it, now thinking i should've. not that i can write. i want my pelican, just after my hoverboard.
a few nits to pick on tech vocab..

http://www.drjack.info/INFO/DELMONTE/img2.page.html soaring gains altitude, gliding loses altitude….reminds me of a prior scifi where the kids were flying in the air supply of a moon base, or arc ship.. don’t remember, may have been a girl protag. but 1/6th g or less make muscle power borderline plausible, is your pelican powered for propulsion/lift, or just the auxiliary legs, controls, etc.? just wondering

respiration is accurate, but sounds a bit prissy, would panting or heavy breathing be more in tune? i was going to mention busty before, thought better of it, now thinking i should’ve. not that i can write.

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