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Thesis progress

I’m going through Home and Garden now, polishing each section. I’m more than a third done. I’m realizing that the story is lacking texture. For instance, there aren’t many descriptions of what’s in the house Martin lives in. The layout is clear, but the details are missing. The other big issue I’ve been tackling is breaking up long dialogues with beats and narration. We’re getting there, folks.

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